this is not about getting it right, figuring things out, or hitting a bull's-eye. this is not about an obsession with word choice or an exacting eye on grammatical correctness. this is not about pulling out all the stops with tricky literary devices. this is about looking at life one paragraph at time.
all poems and photographs
© by Maya Stein
all poems and photographs
© by Maya Stein
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© by Maya Stein
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Monday, August 07, 2006
how we began
soft clutch against an earthtone wall
a small hello, barely visible to the naked eye
except we both saw it, that subsurface want,
the inches it would take for collision
to mess things up so beautifully,
a walled-off construction site
with its stern instruction for hardhats
we happily disobeyed,
that's how we began.
and that's how we shuffled forward,
feeling the knots of ourselves coming undone
with each footfall, each nightfall, each time
the moon rose up in all her elegance
and bestowed her luminescent gifts
on our limbs, the bay outside
reflecting this easy acquiescence,
nodding us to sleep.
it would not be enough to say i love you.
it would not be enough
to exchange simple syllables for the grand expanse
of my heart, its tender-tempo'ed thumping.
it would not be enough to tell anyone precisely
how my eyes go soft-focus when you give
yourself to me, surrendering your neck to my shoulder,
your cheek to my lips, the small of your back
to my waiting palm.
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5 comments:
i feel like this deserves a "happy anniversary!" i'm so glad you're noticing and savoring these details of love. i hope you have many more years building joy together. and yes, always ignore the hard hat signs. :)
This is such a pretty piece. Very powerful in its simplicity. I love the imagery in the end.
Me too — the last stanza.
To be loved by you and written to by you is to be blessed indeed. The one you love has much for which to give thanks. May your love grow deeper and stronger. All the best, Gail
:O). Words so crisp with beauty, my mouth waters for my own.
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