tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10097960.post2813380596167678941..comments2023-09-26T05:52:15.394-07:00Comments on one paragraph at a time: splitting the laneUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10097960.post-73887382586740070882007-08-08T19:35:00.000-07:002007-08-08T19:35:00.000-07:00maya this may be my favorite poem of yours i've ev...maya this may be my favorite poem of yours i've ever read. it was long and quiet and committed just like your time at the pool, and i was with you every step (or stroke) of the way. and the quiet, wonderful resolution -- i just love it! there is so much wisdom in this poem, so much that applies to so many things. thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10097960.post-1448185311308351072007-08-07T14:53:00.000-07:002007-08-07T14:53:00.000-07:00I really like the part about unfastening from the ...I really like the part about unfastening from the notion of claiming some space as my own, some lane, some corner of the world. I do need privacy, but I must learn to negotiate it with those I love and live with. This is how two bodies, two lives, two souls learn to swim, live, laugh, and thrive together. <BR/><BR/>Wonderful, Maya, simply wonderful.GailNHBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11632210289246687829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10097960.post-87837098468361364442007-08-06T05:36:00.000-07:002007-08-06T05:36:00.000-07:00Such beautiful resolution at the end...although I ...Such beautiful resolution at the end...although I don't think I could have gotten there. ;) You so perfectly captured the anxious discomfort I feel when sharing space of any kind with anyone who's not my mate. Movie theaters, restaurants, car rides, conference rooms...I must have an overly-sensitive 'personal space' boundary. ;) I think that's why our little home feels so sacred to me...I can EXPAND there even if he's just inches away from me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com